Meaningful and more sophisticated as the coordinated longer sentences are, yet we find the whole passage sounds dull, because too many compound sentences make no sense of what the writer cares more about.
举一反三
- Too many simple sentences will make the passage loose and not cohesive. We need try different sentence types.
- Compared with loose sentences, periodic sentences are more forceful because of the contrast and pleasing to hear because of the rhythm.
- 中国大学MOOC: Which of the following sentences sounds more credible?
- Why can’t man prevent the world from being polluted A: It’s because there are many developing nations. B: It’s because people use too many man-made materials. C: It’s because we have more and more industry. D: It’s because we are building more vehicles.
- Too many people diet to make themselves more attractive.