Readthefollowingparagraph Themostdepressingthingaboutanillnessisthesenseofbeingleftoutorbrushedasidebyitfromthemainstreamofliving.Whenapersonisill,hecannotkeepupwiththeworldofhealthypeople.Lifebeginstooccurwithouthim.Evenlanguageseemstochange.Whatissaidtoasickpersondoesnotinvolvehim,andthereforehebeginstointerpretitdifferently.Helosestouchwiththeouter,healthyworld.Hissenseofisolationisincreasedratherthanlessenedbytheregularvisitsofthedoctor.Thedoctorlabelsthesickperson’sdiseaseandconfineshimtohisspecialplace.Withtactandskill,thedoctorcompletesthepatient’shelplessnessandmakesfinalhisdivisionfromtheworldofstrongarms,soundlegs,clearskin,andlungsthatbreathedeeply.Thesickperson’sonlyhopeistoreturntolifeagain,andheclingstothethoughtofgettingwell. (qtd.fromKathleenE.Sullivan,ParagraphPractice,p.125)
Readthefollowingparagraph Themostdepressingthingaboutanillnessisthesenseofbeingleftoutorbrushedasidebyitfromthemainstreamofliving.Whenapersonisill,hecannotkeepupwiththeworldofhealthypeople.Lifebeginstooccurwithouthim.Evenlanguageseemstochange.Whatissaidtoasickpersondoesnotinvolvehim,andthereforehebeginstointerpretitdifferently.Helosestouchwiththeouter,healthyworld.Hissenseofisolationisincreasedratherthanlessenedbytheregularvisitsofthedoctor.Thedoctorlabelsthesickperson’sdiseaseandconfineshimtohisspecialplace.Withtactandskill,thedoctorcompletesthepatient’shelplessnessandmakesfinalhisdivisionfromtheworldofstrongarms,soundlegs,clearskin,andlungsthatbreathedeeply.Thesickperson’sonlyhopeistoreturntolifeagain,andheclingstothethoughtofgettingwell. (qtd.fromKathleenE.Sullivan,ParagraphPractice,p.125)